grammars

Co-authored-by: Jonah Aragon <[email protected]>
Signed-off-by: Daniel Nathan Gray <[email protected]>

docs/desktop.md

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     ![Fedora Silverblue logo](assets/img/linux-desktop/fedora-silverblue.svg){ align=right }
 
-    **Fedora Silverblue** is an immutable variants of Fedora with a strong focus on container workflows. Silverblue comes with the [GNOME](https://www.gnome.org/) desktop environment while [Kinoite](https://fedoraproject.org/kinoite/) comes with [KDE](https://kde.org/). There are other variants too including [Sericea](https://fedoraproject.org/sericea/) which is distributed with the [Wayland](https://wayland.freedesktop.org) only tiling window manager, [Sway](https://swaywm.org/). We don't recommend [Onyx](https://fedoraproject.org/onyx/) at this time as it still [requires X11](https://buddiesofbudgie.org/blog/wayland). All of these variants follow the same release schedule as Fedora Workstation, benefiting from the same fast updates and staying very close to upstream.
+    **Fedora Silverblue** is an immutable variant of Fedora with a strong focus on container workflows and the [GNOME](https://www.gnome.org/) desktop environment. If you prefer an environment other than GNOME, there are also other variants including [Kinoite](https://fedoraproject.org/kinoite/) (which comes with [KDE](https://kde.org/)) and [Sericea](https://fedoraproject.org/sericea/) (which comes with [Sway](https://swaywm.org/), a [Wayland](https://wayland.freedesktop.org)-only tiling window manager). We don't recommend [Onyx](https://fedoraproject.org/onyx/) at this time as it still [requires X11](https://buddiesofbudgie.org/blog/wayland). All of these variants follow the same release schedule as Fedora Workstation, benefiting from the same fast updates and staying very close to upstream.
 
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     [:octicons-info-16:](https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-silverblue/){ .card-link title=Documentation}