chore: docs

apps/web/pages/index.tsx

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             We can use adversarial incentivised networks like <a href="https://ethereum.org">Ethereum</a> to perform computation with very strong guarantees of correctness, immutability and verifiability.
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-            Although the security and resilience of public blockchains are indeed thanks to their open nature, humans nonetheless have a fundamental right to privacy, and decentralized autonomous organizations must be capable of privileged non-invasive handling of secure data.
+            Although the security and resilience of public blockchains are indeed thanks to their open nature, humans nonetheless have a fundamental right to privacy. Similarly, increasing competition for block space and the subsequent rise in gas fees demand that we take more computation and data off-chain without compromising on our stringent operational expectations.
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-            A zero knowledge proof is a goldilocks paradigm, an inexplicable feature of the mathematics of the universe; it helps us all operate privately, securely, trustlessly, with integrity; all via publicly-verifiable information channels.
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-            The ability to securely and indisputably demonstrate access to information without revealing that information is magical.
+            A zero knowledge proof is a goldilocks paradigm, an inexplicable feature of the mathematics of the universe which helps us all operate privately, securely, trustlessly, minimally, with integrity; and above all else, in plain sight.
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